Ahahaha...ha....hoo boy....

Okay...so the anatomy's off again. You need to practice with it. Not to mention, the image is crooked, like you drew it at an angle, and you can't do that.

Also, it looks like there's nothing beneath his kimono as far as arms go. Speaking of the kimono, there's no folds, no creases, no seams, no nothing. You need to get into those little details, it's what makes the pic.

The hair looks...okay, but you need to make sure that it's wrapped around some sort of head-like figure, not just kind of improvised. And onto the face...the ear's too high up on the head, either that, or the eyes are too low. The eyes and ear are always (ALWAYS) in line. and there's no details in the ear. The eyebrows look a little awkward, too. Like, they're tilted in too much.

Just work on stuff like that, remember everything I said.

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wow... im sooooo gonna win if i have to go against this! xD

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XD ty with the ear-eye thing lol alexa is gona put this up against her "master piece"

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Yeah, I heard. xD Apparently, she's confident. Are you?

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wow...and that's not a "hey that's a good pic" wow. thats a "you couldnt do any better?"wow

it was evil but i couldnt help but grin. XD

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yea. despite what u said. i think it looks good. (no offense to her) but her drawings are squares, not circles....yea u heard me. i said it, and i dont even CARE... (srry that was a 10:58 in the night jolt/high moment...usually happens in the night.... so when we're at Otakon, look out for those

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lol. I didn't say it sucked or anything. I was just critiquing your work. As an artist, you have to learn how to take critique from other artists about your work and use them to learn how to be better; you shouldn't just ignore it and shrug it off saying, "I still think it looks good, so that's all that matters". Because it DOES matter what other people think sometimes, that's why deviantART exists, so you can get opinions from others. And plus...lol, if you were a little less cocky about your work (no offense) people would be less eager to say things like that.

And I don't even get the "squares and circles" thing. o.O;;

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i didnt get it either, and if im cocky.... alexa is like ....... more.... XD couldn't find an emoticon for her. And i totally dont ignore your advice note the eyes are not too close together, (i hope). I just think that
I have a chance to win.... unless she whips something up like vaith. T_T

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